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Monday, September 7, 2009

Abandoned


I found you on my walk
I don't know to whom you belonged
Y no se como obtuvieron el valor,
And I don't know how they got the courage to toss you aside
But if gloom has been abandoned
Deseo,
I hope it is because happiness has taken your place
I hope that while you whither dreams are blossoming
You have caused enough damage, haven't you?

15 comments:

  1. your words are simply beautiful. great post.

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  2. Very strong message! Makes me think of all the things that are tossed aside. Take care.

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  3. :-) Great catch on this photo. I love the idea of abandoning gloom!

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  4. beautiful poem and powerful message. i hope we can all abandon gloom.

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  5. oh this was tender and truthful ...so well done

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  6. Beautiful message in your poem, accompanied by such a stark photo...it has made me think...

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  7. Fabulous take on the theme! Love your writing.

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  8. Gloom abandoned...beautiful...

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  9. This piece works so well. Well-written AND perfectly captured.

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  10. Oh I love the line "gloom has been abandoned". Very powerful.

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  11. Fantastic post! and love how you weave in Spanish here and there!

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